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Pure cleansing rain,
Never shall I fall out of love with thee.

You cleanse my spirit,
You wash away the bad thoughts,
The bad moods,
The depression.

You purge my mind,
Of those I shouldn’t think of,
Those who are my enemies,
Those who aren’t my friends,
And those who I shouldn’t love,
But do.

Your wonderful purity,
In its last form,
Is the tiny droplets,
Left on my hair,
And my clothes,
And the dampness reminding me,
Of all that you washed away.
:iconaddictedtogerardway:

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i wrote this a long time ago when it was raining on the way to school so i decided to get off the coach at the boys' school and walk to the girls' school instead just so i could walk in the rain.
have you ever noticed that rain has a particular smell?

i just couldn't be arsed to send it home and post it (i can't use dA at school)

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:iconlordbeazy:
Thats quite good, and I even like rain, at times, so long as its not wet! :)

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:iconaddictedtogerardway:
haha! yeh i love rain, just not damp rain. only the rain that falls as rain should.

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:iconlordbeazy:
into each life some rain must fall tra la la :)

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Those who are good at liberating people, are also good at enslaving them. Plato.
:iconaddictedtogerardway:
wats with the singing?

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OFFICIAL FRERARD SONG- [link] The Vampire and His Pint Sized Romeo

*addictedtogerardway is playing the waiting game
She is playing to win.
:iconlordbeazy:
T'was one of my granny's songs! :D

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Those who are good at liberating people, are also good at enslaving them. Plato.
:iconaddictedtogerardway:
ohhkay

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OFFICIAL FRERARD SONG- [link] The Vampire and His Pint Sized Romeo

*addictedtogerardway is playing the waiting game
She is playing to win.
:iconemerlay:
I HATE RAIN, but this poem is okay
:iconaddictedtogerardway:
aw thanks emerlay!!!

i only like this sort of rain. :)

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OFFICIAL FRERARD SONG- [link] The Vampire and His Pint Sized Romeo

*addictedtogerardway is playing the waiting game
She is playing to win.
:iconxxmcr-devotedxx:
Wow, this is beatuiful! I love the smell of the rain too ^.^

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